Alumni voted one of the eight cutest couples in Austin
by rachel Wilson
I liked how Cynthia Gonzalez and Joseph Santa Ana talked about their love for one another, it's amazing to me to see a couple out of high school still together. It's cute how they talked about how they meet too, i also liked how they talked about Santa Ana and Gonzalez playing sports and being in choir all four years in high school.
I disliked how they actually put a article like this in Akins news newspapaer, why can't they put something more interesting in it other then the cutest couples in Austin, talk about things going on around the school like teen pregnacy. The article really didn't say much towards the end either.
The improvements that i would make to this article, would probably be adding more to the end of the article it ended it off with talking about how they're celebrating their birthdays's together and how old their turnng I personally think that they shouldn't of ended it that way. Talk about something more fun like where do they see themselves in 5 years from now or if they see each other getting married in the future.
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